Re: Castle by the Sea
Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2016 10:58 pm
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I downloaded R6 and came up with this list of corrections for CS1.
pg 1
The space between Introduction and The Adventures needs a line to help separate them, on more than one occasion I went from the line, "What to do?" to "The Adventures…" and then down to "makes this an attractive invitation, as he might" to "Forum user Dustinian donated money..." by putting a line between the sections readers will know to move to the top of the second column and have it make sense.
Caer Mortling
Pg 3 - 2. Foyer - First Text Box
Its vaulted ceiling rises up about 20 feet above you.
should be
Its vaulted ceiling rises about 20 feet above you.
"Rises up" is redundant.
pg 4 - 6. Locked Storage - second paragraph
Ring of Sustenance - This isn't a known ring (not in the other BFRPG Core books: Rules, Field Guide, BF1, BF2, JN1, JN2, JN3, AA1, or DC1) May want to get details from Joe Hankel, Clever Munkey to put into a New Magic Items section. Please, let me know if I missed the ring from some where else.
pg 7 - This page is blank may need to see if there are extra line breaks that are making this page show up.
Castle of the Unknown
pg 9 – 1. Bridge – Text box paragraph 2
“As you draw closer, you see that road ends in a bridge which crosses a moat surrounding the castle.”
Should be
“As you draw closer, you see the road ends in a bridge which crosses a moat surrounding the castle.”
pg 14 – 17. Statuary
The HP of the second Iron Living Statue says 21 there are 24 boxes.
Conclave at the Conch Throne
pg 21 – 10. Left Rook Chamber (Pearls of Wisdom)
Says to use each pearl once, there are six pearls and the possibility of 8 players. Should there be two more pearls?
Pg 24 – 21. South West Tower, Upper – Description paragraph
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by the Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Should be
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Pg 24 – 22. North West Tower, Upper – Description paragraph
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by the Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Should be
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Fortress of the Barbarian Queen
pg 26 – Notes on the Castle – Wandering Monsters
There are several wandering monsters, but they haven’t been given any stats.
pg 29 – 12. Staircase – second paragraph
“The barbarians have set the stars with a rolling barrel trap.”
Should be
“The barbarians have set the stairs with a rolling barrel trap.”
Castle Under the Sea
pg 36 – 17. East Hall – 6 Locathah with spears:
For each set of boxes two are missing.
Call of Doom
pg 38 – What’s going on here? 3rd paragraph
“By some perverse gift of the god of undead, t can cast the spells it knew in life,…”
Should be
“By some perverse gift of the god of the undead, it can cast the spells it knew in life,…”
Open Game License
pg 49 – 15 Copyright Notice
May need to include copyright notice for the Barbarian Supplement since it was mentioned in “Fortress of the Barbarian Queen”
I downloaded R6 and came up with this list of corrections for CS1.
pg 1
The space between Introduction and The Adventures needs a line to help separate them, on more than one occasion I went from the line, "What to do?" to "The Adventures…" and then down to "makes this an attractive invitation, as he might" to "Forum user Dustinian donated money..." by putting a line between the sections readers will know to move to the top of the second column and have it make sense.
Caer Mortling
Pg 3 - 2. Foyer - First Text Box
Its vaulted ceiling rises up about 20 feet above you.
should be
Its vaulted ceiling rises about 20 feet above you.
"Rises up" is redundant.
pg 4 - 6. Locked Storage - second paragraph
Ring of Sustenance - This isn't a known ring (not in the other BFRPG Core books: Rules, Field Guide, BF1, BF2, JN1, JN2, JN3, AA1, or DC1) May want to get details from Joe Hankel, Clever Munkey to put into a New Magic Items section. Please, let me know if I missed the ring from some where else.
pg 7 - This page is blank may need to see if there are extra line breaks that are making this page show up.
Castle of the Unknown
pg 9 – 1. Bridge – Text box paragraph 2
“As you draw closer, you see that road ends in a bridge which crosses a moat surrounding the castle.”
Should be
“As you draw closer, you see the road ends in a bridge which crosses a moat surrounding the castle.”
pg 14 – 17. Statuary
The HP of the second Iron Living Statue says 21 there are 24 boxes.
Conclave at the Conch Throne
pg 21 – 10. Left Rook Chamber (Pearls of Wisdom)
Says to use each pearl once, there are six pearls and the possibility of 8 players. Should there be two more pearls?
Pg 24 – 21. South West Tower, Upper – Description paragraph
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by the Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Should be
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Pg 24 – 22. North West Tower, Upper – Description paragraph
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by the Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Should be
“Anyone on this tower will be attacked by Moira Morcha, the manticore, from area 18.”
Fortress of the Barbarian Queen
pg 26 – Notes on the Castle – Wandering Monsters
There are several wandering monsters, but they haven’t been given any stats.
pg 29 – 12. Staircase – second paragraph
“The barbarians have set the stars with a rolling barrel trap.”
Should be
“The barbarians have set the stairs with a rolling barrel trap.”
Castle Under the Sea
pg 36 – 17. East Hall – 6 Locathah with spears:
For each set of boxes two are missing.
Call of Doom
pg 38 – What’s going on here? 3rd paragraph
“By some perverse gift of the god of undead, t can cast the spells it knew in life,…”
Should be
“By some perverse gift of the god of the undead, it can cast the spells it knew in life,…”
Open Game License
pg 49 – 15 Copyright Notice
May need to include copyright notice for the Barbarian Supplement since it was mentioned in “Fortress of the Barbarian Queen”