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Saving Throw Options

Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2014 8:37 pm
by mTeasdale
So, as I said on the forum last week, I decided to try my luck on a Saving Throw supplement.

Guys, I really want your comments, critics, ideas, and so on. I will also probably need a little help on the spelling and grammar, as English is not my first language.

Solo, I posted it in the Showcase, if you prefer to remove it for now, that's ok. I just thought that would be easier this way.

Download links :

OpenOffice : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.odt

PDF : http://basicfantasy.org/showcase-downlo ... ons-r6.pdf

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Sun Nov 30, 2014 11:04 pm
by Solomoriah
mTeasdale wrote:Solo, I posted it in the Showcase, if you prefer to remove it for now, that's ok. I just thought that would be easier this way.
If I gave you Showcase privileges, it's because I trust you. As long as your publication is "complete" (no parts left out that you intend to add "later"), that's all that matters.

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 8:00 am
by chiisu81
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: extra space before the colon
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: correct "its the target number" to "it's..."
First Option sub-header: extra space before colon
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "Finally, Will measure" to "...measures..."
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "affect" to "affects"
Second Option sub-header: extra space before colon
Second Option, 3rd paragraph: correct spelling of "Additionnally" (remove extra n)

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 9:12 am
by Maliki
I like it, I know its not "old school" but I prefer the 3 save categories, over the old 5 categories.

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 10:07 am
by Koren_nRhys
I prefer the "old school" five categories personally, but this is a nice addition to the supplement pool. For me, it would prove most useful in conversion of adventures from d20 or S&W to BFRPG.

Nice job!

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2014 9:48 pm
by mTeasdale
chiisu81 wrote:Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: extra space before the colon
Using this supplement, 2nd paragraph: correct "its the target number" to "it's..."
First Option sub-header: extra space before colon
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "Finally, Will measure" to "...measures..."
First Option, 3rd paragraph: correct "affect" to "affects"
Second Option sub-header: extra space before colon
Second Option, 3rd paragraph: correct spelling of "Additionnally" (remove extra n)
Thanks chiisu ! I corrected all that stuff and a few others things and then added a picture. R2 uploaded.

Thanks for the good comments guys !

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Wed Dec 03, 2014 2:28 pm
by chiisu81
Be sure to add an image credit for Sudsy (Michael Sutherland)

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2014 12:00 am
by mTeasdale
chiisu81 wrote:Be sure to add an image credit for Sudsy (Michael Sutherland)
My bad, I wanted to do it and totally forgot. Will do it as soon as possible. By the way, do you want me to add you for checking out spelling and grammar ?

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2014 7:45 am
by chiisu81
A proofing credit would be appreciated :) (James Lemon)

Re: Saving Throw Options

Posted: Thu Dec 04, 2014 8:02 am
by SmootRK
chiisu81 wrote:A proofing credit would be appreciated :) (James Lemon)
James "chiisu81" Lemmon really ought to be on every document's credit list. He proofs everything.
Every document is better because of him!