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Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2016 12:40 am
by Solomoriah
Ack. Just pushed an updated R29 PDF... please check it out.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Wed Nov 30, 2016 9:15 am
by chiisu81
R29 looks ok; if no-one else finds anything I think we'll be good for new print release.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:04 am
by Solomoriah
Lulu is updated as of right now. CreateSpace is doing the usual dance, and will probably be up to date tomorrow.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2017 12:03 pm
by chiisu81
Great, thank you! 8-) Downloads entry will need to be updated at some point.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Thu Mar 02, 2017 10:49 pm
by Solomoriah
CreateSpace has it now.

And the Downloads page is updated too. No need to prompt me about it...

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Wed May 10, 2017 5:12 am
by vskull
Page 59 Rabbit Prince second paragraph:

"The prince rabbit attacks with.."

shouldn't it be

"The rabbit prince attacks with.."

Page 60 Rabbit Prince (continued):

"Instead of attacking a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."

Inserting a comma after attacking, looks and sounds better to me. There should be a slight pause before continuing the sentence.

"Instead of attacking, a rabbit prince may rapidly thump.."

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Wed May 10, 2017 9:22 am
by Solomoriah
Yeah, I've noticed there are still some rough spots. When time permits, I want to go through and rewrite all the awkward bits.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Mon May 15, 2017 4:38 pm
by chiisu81
I've started work on r30 with track changes enabled.

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Tue May 16, 2017 10:02 am
by chiisu81
Yikes, too many changes to have track changes enabled, Solo would have a stroke. ;) Working on R30 and then sending to him. So glad I already made a tablet-friendly version, will have to be updated soon as well. :D

Re: Basic Fantasy Field Guide

Posted: Tue May 16, 2017 3:38 pm
by chiisu81
R30 sent to Solo.